高中英语写作精细指导(上下)

高中英语写作精细指导(上下)
作者: 编者:康明
出版社: 清华大学
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ISBN: 9787302492818

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第三章说明文写作指导第一节介 绍 学 校〖1〗主题介绍校园环境为纪念汶川大地震三周年,某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动。请根据以下图片提示,以“Great Changes”为题,用英文写一篇应征短文。内容要点如下: (1) 某中学灾后三年来的变化,如教学与活动场所以及师生精神面貌等。 (2) 发生变化的原因。 (3) 你的感想。 注意: ①短文标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数; ②可根据图片提示适当发挥; ③词数120左右。 I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years. 第三章说明文写作指导解 题 指 导 要点1灾后几年来某中学的变化 该部分包括教学与活动场所以及师生精神面貌等在震后的变化。 高级句型和段落 (一) 描述教学楼的情况 使用简单句: 1. Through a year of reconstruction, the school can hold up to 1,000 students and consists of main buildings, a dining hall and other facilities. 2. The new school now occupies a larger space, about five times the size of the old school. 3. The newlybuilt main building is a fourstory facility and accommodates about 30 classrooms.使用被动语态: 1. A new threestory concrete building has been built and houses classrooms, a library and a computer room equipped with 20 computers. 2. Two main buildings with five floors have been built up and each has classrooms and computer labs. 3. Tall buildings have been set up, including classrooms and laboratory rooms, as well as a library. 使用分词: 1. Through a year of reconstruction, the school can hold up to 1,000 students, consisting of main buildings, a dining hall and other facilities. 2. A new threestory concrete building has been built, housing classrooms, a library and a computer room equipped with 20 computers. 3. The school went through a major reconstruction, just one year after the earthquake, adding a new library and a gym. 4. The newlybuilt main building is a fourstory facility, accommodating about 30 classrooms and 1,000 students. 5. Two main buildings with five floors have been built up, each having classrooms and computer labs.使用定语从句: 1. Through a year of reconstruction, the school, which can hold up to 1,000 students, consists of main buildings, a dining hall and other facilities. 2. A new twostory concrete building has been built, which houses classrooms, a library and a computer room equipped with 20 computers, much better than the previous school. 3. Just a year following the earthquake, the school underwent a largescale rebuilding, which added a new library and a spacious gym. 4. Tall buildings have been set up that/which include classrooms and laboratory buildings, as well as a new library. 5. The newlybuilt main building is a fourstory facility which accommodates about 1,000 students. 6. Two main buildings have been rebuilt, each of which is equipped with classrooms and computer labs. (二) 描述多媒体教室的情况使用一般句式: 1. Each classroom has a computer connection to bring computer technology to each student. 2. A total of 30 new classrooms with advanced teaching facilities have been put into use. 3. Computers and new technology are applied to the learning spaces throughout the school. 使用分词: 1. A total of 30 new classrooms with advanced teaching facilities have been put into use, accommodating about 1,000 students. 2. Each classroom is equipped with a computer, a projector and a TV, allowing students easy access to high quality learning. 3. Each classroom has computers and Internet access, allowing the students to experience the most advanced educational resources. 4. Each classroom has a computer connection, making computer technology accessible to each student. 使用定语从句: 1. A total of 30 new classrooms with advanced facilities have been put into use, which can accommodate approximately 1,000 students. 2. Each classroom is equipped with a computer, a projector and a TV, which allows students easy access to high quality learning. 3. Each classroom has a computer connection, which makes high technology easily accessible to all students. (三) 描述操场的情况 1. The playground has been repaired and renovated for students to play sports. 2. Manmade grass and a plastic athletic track (跑道) have also been restored and upgraded. 3. Courtyards were developed between the buildings to offer a comfortable, secure place for outdoor activities. 4. The playground has been repaired and renovated, providing convenience for students to exercise. 5. Manmade grass and a plastic athletic track have been put down, turning the playground into a clean green and red one. 6. A courtyard was developed between the buildings, offering a comfortable, secure place for outdoor activities. 7. The playground, where students can play sports, has been carefully repaired and renovated. 8. Manmade grass and a plastic athletic track have been restored and remodeled, which gives students a cleaner environment to exercise in. 9. Courtyards, which were developed between the buildings, provide a comfortable, secure place for outdoor activities. (四) 描述其他设施,如心理咨询室、图书馆、体育馆和计算机房等 1. Theres another building, which is home to psychological counseling (心理咨询) rooms and various mental healthrelated educational activities. 2. One of the buildings also has a large balcony that overlooks the spacious playground and the gym. 3. The recentlybuilt library has introduced roughly 200 imported books on subjects ranging from history to geography. 4. Recently, teaching facilities have been further (进一步地) upgraded, with each classroom equipped with a projector and a color TV. 5. Housing a spacious swimming pool and two basketball courts, the gym has become a venue which students enjoy visiting regularly. 6. Two dedicated (专用的) computer labs are shared by all classes in the school. 7. Two dedicated computer labs are available, allowing/which allows all classes in the school to share. (五) 师生的精神面貌使用定语从句: 1. The biggest change that has occurred are teachers and students who, after going through deep sorrow and grief, have decided to forget the terrible time and just think of happy things. 2. The most impressive are the teachers and students who have erased their grief, picked themselves up and walked through the darkest days. 3. What has impressed/struck me most are the teachers and students who have become more determined and optimistic than ever towards their future. 4. Another change that has deeply impressed me is that the teachers and students have got over the pain brought by the disaster and displayed delight and optimism again. 5. Most impressively, the teachers and students have recovered psychologically from the earthquake, which manifested/displayed their spirits of resilience (快速恢复的能力) and tenacity (韧性).使用名词从句: 1. The happiest change is that after experiencing so many hardships during the earthquake, the teachers and students are now radiating hope and vitality (活力) again. 2. The most striking change is although the disaster has brought distress and sorrow, the teachers and students managed to create an atmosphere that is less depressive (沮丧的) and more positive. 3. The most noticeable change lies in the fact that teachers and students have had radiant smiles back on their faces again, thinking they can beat everything from now on since they survived the deadly earthquake! 4. Another incredible change is, by sharing their grief and helping each other to move on, the teachers and students have recovered mentally from the earthquake. 使用分词: 1. More impressively, its a relief to see that, leaving their sorrows behind, the bereaved (丧失亲友的) teachers and students have moved on again with confident and vibrant smiles. 2. Equally impressive, teachers and students have now returned to/headed back to the newlybuilt school, feeling stronger than before in fighting difficulties. 3. Whats more impressive, teachers and students have had radiant smiles back on their faces again, thinking they can beat everything from now on since they survived the "提供英语考试中各类文体作文所需的语言材料,有要点详解,有优秀范文,有综合练习。适合初高中学生备考之用,同时还融入了托福、雅思等考试写作部分的应试要求和思路,为备考托福、雅思等的考生提供基础性的写作指导。 "